Writing task 2 template _ guidelines
SAMPLE ANSWER:
Some parents may worry that pushing their children towards a
particular career could be harmful. While I agree it is unwise to predetermine
a child’s profession, parents should still offer guidance through open
communication.
Young people need freedom to make choices, especially when it comes to
their careers. Even parents who agree with this idea may still feel some
anxiety about it. Ultimately, most parents hope their children will be
financially secure. Deep down some parents may also want their children to
choose prestigious careers, or jobs that will impact society in some way. These
wishes are normal and not necessarily harmful. Yet, it can be problematic if
these desires turn into firm expectations. In such cases, the main motivation
for a child becomes fear of disappointing her parents. It can lead to
resentment if she spends her life doing something she doesn’t enjoy. With
freedom to explore, by contrast, she can take ownership of her career decisions
and develop internal motivation to reach her goals.
Yet, offering a child freedom does not imply that parents should be
absent. To the contrary, parents should strive to foster open communication
about career decisions. If a child’s aspirations do not line up with his
parents’ wishes, he may fear that approaching them could lead to judgment and
confrontation. However, if he feels that his parents will listen carefully and
maintain an open attitude, he may let down his guard and welcome their
feedback. When this happens, parents can provide guidance and, importantly, even
critiques of their child’s plans. In this way, open communication creates
opportunities for young people to benefit from their parents’ wisdom and
experience.
In conclusion, even though parents should avoid pressuring their
children to follow specific career paths, they should not abandon the
discussion. Parents should strive to create an environment where they can offer
caring guidance through open communication.
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